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  • Tuesday Citation: Short-Order Cook by Jim Daniels

    An average joe comes in
    and orders thirty cheeseburgers and thirty fries.

    I wait for him to pay before I start cooking.
    He pays.
    He ain’t no average joe.

    The grill is just big enough for ten rows of three.
    I slap the burgers down
    throw two buckets of fries in the deep frier
    and they pop pop, spit spit. . .
    pssss. . .
    The counter girls laugh.
    I concentrate.
    It is the crucial point–
    they are ready for the cheese:
    my fingers shake as I tear off slices
    toss them on the burgers/fries done/dump/
    refill buckets/burgers ready/flip into buns/
    beat that melting cheese/wrap burgers in plastic/
    into paper bags/fried done/dump/fill thirty bags/
    bring them to the counter/wipe sweat on sleeve
    and smile at the counter girls.
    I puff my chest out and bellow:
    Thirty cheeseburgers! Thirty fries!
    I grab a handful of ice, toss it in my mouth
    do a little dance and walk back to the grill.
    Pressure, responsibility, success.
    Thirty cheeseburgers, thirty fries.

    From Show and Tell: New and Selected Poems by Jim Daniels. Originally appeared in Places/Everyone. Copyright © 1985 by Jim Daniels.